A2 Audience Feedback - 28/03/14

On Friday 28th March, I showed the class a rough cut of my sneak peek to get feedback from them on how it looks. It was very interesting and enlightening. However, I cannot re-film any of the individual shots because the clothes and props were destroyed when filming. So any improvements will have to be solely made in editing.



Good points:

• Ending is great - quite scary, not sure what will happen in the coming film.
• Realistic handheld camera - keeps you in the action.

Bad points:

• The ear ringing sound effect is too loud - adjust volume.
• Unclear if Anna had died or not - hand was too rigid and dialogue wasn't clear for what happens. Adjust volume throughout to account for different camera positions and levels of speaking.
• High pitched sound was maybe a little too early - if someone saw it 'cold', they might struggle to understand what was happening. Adjust when it comes in until it is at a more appropriate time.
• Fake blood was a little too much on Anna's face, but colour/texture was quite accurate.
• Could have tried to strike her with the hammer, but couldn't do it at the last second - make it more clear with what Jack was trying to do.